Sunday, September 20, 2015

Thinking

I can't sleep
I'm thinking about you
I'm thinking about you like how boys think about girls and how girls think about boys
I'm thinking about you like how clouds think about rain
I'm thinking about you like how snow thinks about the sun and how kids think about fun.
I'm thinking about you
I Don't know why I can't stop.
I'm think about you like how horses think about running and how candles think about burning
I'm thinking.
I can't stop thinking. Even when I sleep you are still there.

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2 comments:

  1. Nettie LuellaSeptember 28, 2015 at 7:35 AM

    I'm likin this post.

    Story of my life

    Thinking thinking thinking thinking thinking thinking thinking thinkin

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  2. JSeptember 30, 2015 at 8:11 AM

    Love your last line! I really enjoyed your use of nature with the rain and clouds, sun and snow. It helps the reader to grasp how you're thinking about this someone. Great job!

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